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6XL: Luis Chorale by AceWu 6XL: Luis Chorale by AceWu
Edit 9/19/12: Haha oh man I need to give this a major rehaul. Hopefully I can get one done before Round 2 (that being if I make it)
Edit 11/4/12: Added Tove, slightly modified Luis's hair to better fit how I currently draw it (still need to get around to redrawing his picture)
Edit 5/4/13: Completely redrew everything and added Bandersnatch. (old application - [link])

For :iconsixfold-league:

(for extra stuff go here [link])


Name: Luis Chorale (loo-eece kor-al)
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 5'8"
Personality: Upbeat and a bit of a goof, Luis does not seem like someone of the noble land of Ladon. Though he would rather crack a joke than act serious, he holds his father, the one who chose to move to Ladon, in high respect, and puts on a composed look whenever necessary to maintain a good standing in the dragon faction's ranks. Although he thinks dragon pokemon are great, his favorite type is grass, perhaps because it reminds him of his hometown's dense forests, or because he shares a strong bond with his starter, a grass type.
Brief History: Luis's father was an adventurer who explored the whole of Hoenn, at first with no one but his pokemon, and then with a girl he met in Fortree City. They trekked through caves and across oceans before returning to Fortree to settle down. There, Luis was born and raised. Luis's mother was content with living in their home in the trees, but his father yearned to travel again. This time to a land he'd never seen before, and with his then thirteen year old son. This land would be the faction of Ladon in the Saros region. With a select amount of pokemon and a few important possessions and necessities, Luis and his father bid farewell to their family, Fortree, and the Hoenn region.
When they came to the Saros region, they spent a year travelling to the various factions to decide which one to settle down in. They ended up choosing Ladon for its rustic pace of life. They spent some time adjusting, and soon assimilated into the Ladonian lifestyle, one of towering castles and knights of old. Under the guidance of his father, Luis learned sword fighting and sparring. When not training himself, he trained his Grovyle, the only pokemon he brought from Fortree, which soon evolved. A week before his 16th birthday, his father gave him his Kingdra, but with a catch: Luis would have to catch a dragon pokemon before his 16th birthday, otherwise the Kingdra will be returned to his father. Though Luis found quite a few Axews and Dratinis, he wanted to catch a more ferocious dragon worthy of his father's pride. A month before his birthday, while walking around a forest, he was charged by a Salamence. He caught it after a bit of a scuffle, and so was able to keep his Kingdra.
Misc: Luis likes to use made-up words, especially in exclamations. He sometimes writes a bit of poetry, usually whimsical or nonsensical. He is not one to pass up an opportunity to make a good (or bad) joke. He also has a pretty good singing voice.
He owns a broadsword, but doesn't normally carry it around with him.


Name: Tumtum
Species: Sceptile
Gender: Female
Nature: Calm
Characteristic: Often lost in thought
Ability: Overgrow
Moveset: Leaf storm, Focus blast, X-scissor, Giga drain
Misc: Was Luis's starter, raised from a Treecko. He gave her a crown upon arrival in Ladon. Patient, nurturing personality.
Speech: A bit motherly at times. Slow and soft-spoken.

Name: Vorpal
Species: Kingdra
Gender: Male
Nature: Serious
Characteristic: Good perserverance
Ability: Sniper
Moveset: Dragon pulse, Ice beam, Flash cannon, Hydro pump
Misc: Given to Luis by his father. Stately and well-behaved.
Speech: Refined. Takes things seriously.

Name: Jabberwock
Species: Salamence
Gender: Male
Nature: Bold
Characteristic: Likes to thrash about
Ability: Intimidate
Moveset: Thunder fang, Dragon claw, Flamethrower, Fly
Misc: Still holds a slight grudge against Vorpal for beating him and allowing Luis to catch him. Does not always listen to Luis. Easily annoyed. Prone to bouts of uncontrollable fury when attacked.
Speech: Does not like talking. Speaks laconically and gruffly.

Name: Tove
Species: Kecleon
Gender: Male
Nature: Jolly
Characteristic: Somewhat of a clown
Ability: Color Change
Moveset: Sucker punch, Drain punch, Role play, Dig
Misc: Was the first Pokemon Luis caught. Left behind in Fortree with Luis's family, but brought to Ladon when his mother visited to congratulate him on making it into the tournament. Given the jester hat upon arrival. Silly and light-hearted, much like his trainer. Expressive and likes changing color whenever. A bit of a trickster.
Speech: Laughs easily. Likes to mimic others. Can be a bit sassy.

Name: Bandersnatch
Species: Skarmory
Gender: Male
Nature: Careful
Characteristic: Alert to sounds
Ability: Keen Eye
Moveset: Night slash, Steel wing, Metal sound, Sky attack
Misc: Given to Luis by his mother when she visited before the start of Round 4 to see how her son and husband were faring in the sudden natural disasters. Was Luis's mother's main pokemon and accompanied her on her travels with her husband. Used to be bold until a wild pokemon made to attack Luis's mother, causing him to fly to her defense and get scarred by the wild pokemon's claws. Is now cautious and protective of his trainer.
Speech: Will only talk if he feels the need. To the point.


The inspiration for this character came from the poem "The Jabberwocky" if anyone was wondering. I really like that poem heh.
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rirth Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
OOOohoOOOHOHOHOOHOHHOOH im fighting you! :"D

i really like the sceptile....and the kecleon!
AceWu Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Oooohhhhhh dang! I suppose you are O:! Ah this is going to be a tough battle o^o;

Thank you! Tristram's pretty cool too (those battle scars, man) (so cool)
Envos-the-Bouncy Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Heeeeey! Thanks a whole bunch for
letting me use Luis in my entry!
Here's my round one: [link]
He appears in later pages. xD
AceWu Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Thanks so much for drawing him!
Envos-the-Bouncy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Naww, thanks for letting me use him! xD
4everEvergreen Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL I love everything about this xD
AceWu Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Zusuriki Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your style x3 Awesome character and backstory :la:
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
Thank you! C:
SnowboardingTaco Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Man, I have no idea how I missed this in my inbox! I love Luis' design in this, too. I'm a sucker for slicked back hair and earth tones mixed with neutral colours. xP

I really like his pokemon, too. Especially that sceptile!
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Oh wow thanks! I was pretty excited when they let Ladon trainers use Sceptiles, because they're totally rad.
SnowboardingTaco Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
No problem! They really are. Definitely my favourite starter by far.
Bluefire5 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Haha I like this guy
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Oh thank you!
Strontium-Chloride Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love his little poem! Very cool.
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Tatetops Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, everything looks great, but really it was his poem that won me over XD Awesome character
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
He has quite the way with words, no? Thank you!
PeaceArt79 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I like what you did there in the extra
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Haha thanks!
PurpleQuasar Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
Not bad!!! :horns:
AceWu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Thanks :>
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